Sunday, April 08, 2007
5:04 AM ●
heyy ppl
today so totally was a drag
yesterday i wrote 2 poems
i said i wasnt going to post it
but in the end decided to post it anyway
the 1st one is called "Satan" and in pnglin's opinion is nicer but i dont think so.
this is it:
Darkness and death
Who isn’t afraid of it?
Tell me.
A pointed tail, a forked trident
Red bat-like wings and devilish horns
Are you afraid?
The raven
Black as night
A sign of bad luck
See it in the night
Its dark eyes
Pierce you with its gaze
In the dark night
Illusions
Created by the human mind
Made by shadows
Haunting images appear out of nowhere
The pentacle
Associated with
Satan, demons, ghouls and ghosts
Are you afraid?
Yes
You are
Everyone is
But
I will take care of you
My poor wandering soul
You belong to me now.
For I am
Satan.
Oh, my poor sweet innocent
Soul
You are
Guilty of sin against the lord
Guilty as you were
Sent to me
For punishment
For eternal
Suffering.
is it ok? i think it's a bit too FREAKAYE. dont you think so?on with the other one then.
its titled "The Park"
It is late
And it is already dark
I sit
In the darkness
Watching
The shadowy
Monstrous machines
Flash
To and fro
I sit
On cold
Hard
Wood
I sit
And watch
Watch
The lights
On and then
Off
Never to on again
Until
The next
It is late
Very late
Suddenly
A loud ringing
Piercing the silence
A voice
Loud and clear
Echoes
Echoes over
Some yelling
And then
Silence again
I
Pick myself
Up
And move
Away
Away from
The Park.
is this better? i dont know. ppl who read this,
PLEASE COMMENT! or i'll kill you. jus joking, hehe.
